Mystery at Silver Pine Lake – WIP

“A lake is a landscape’s most beautiful and expressive feature. It is Earth’s eye; looking into which the beholder measures the depth of his own nature.”
–Henry David Thoreau

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September 1972

It was another beautiful afternoon at Silver Pine Lake as Bill Harris traveled southwest across the water in his small powerboat.  Everyone knew largemouth bass and yellow perch could be found almost anywhere, but trout was more of a challenge.  A person had to find the right spot and the best time of day, which for trout, was early morning—or about an hour before sunset.

Bill cut the motor and let the boat drift.  The kokanee, or silver trout, had been biting all summer, but he’d decided to wear his lucky red shirt anyway.  His wife Linda had given it to him for his sixtieth birthday last spring. And every time he wore it, he came back with at least four big trout.

Bill and Linda had started spending their weekends at the lake decades ago, but this was their first full summer.  So far, retirement had been all he’d hoped for, and he smiled as he pulled out his fishing rod.  The past few months had been worth the long years he’d put in as data controller for one of the largest banks in the state.  Back then, Bill had dreamed about moments like this, so he took his time baiting the jig.  Dropping his line in the water, he watched it sink towards the bottom of the lake, pulled it back up, then watched it fall again.

A half hour later, he was reeling in his third fish.  As he reached for his net, he heard raised voices.  Glancing over, he saw two men walking along the shore, not far from the gravel road that cut through the woods to the main highway.  He couldn’t make out who they were, but that didn’t bother him.  Plenty of people visited this end of the lake for hiking and fishing, not to mention the cabins for rent further down, and the larger lake homes on the other side.

Not as many of those cabins were occupied after Labor Day, but enough that Bill turned his focus back to the fish and getting it in the net.  It was another silver trout, and he knew Linda would be happy.  She always cooked whatever fish he brought home, but she preferred trout.  He looked at his watch and decided to try for one more.  After all, he was wearing his lucky red shirt.

The voices grew louder and with the sound carrying across the water, Bill could almost make out what the two men were saying.  Not that he really cared.  He just wanted them to go further down the beach and away from his fishing spot.

When he dropped the line, the voices stopped.  Relieved, he glanced back and saw the second man was picking up a long stick.  At the last moment, he realized the stick was a rifle.  As his eyes widened in surprise, he opened his mouth to say something…and fell backwards.  The shot echoed across the lake, but Bill was dead before he hit the water.

Chapter 1

Susan Lawson pulled over to the side of the road and unfolded the map again.  She had to be close.  She’d been driving since early morning and it was only supposed to be a six-hour trip.

Her cat mewed once.  Looking back at the carrier, Susan replied, “I know, Chloe. We’ll be there soon.”  She turned the map around and tried again, then ran a hand through her auburn brown hair.  “This is hopeless.  There isn’t enough detail to see anything but the main road.  We’ll have to stop and ask at the next place that’s open.”

She pulled onto the road again and a few minutes later, saw a sign for a restaurant up ahead.  As she took the turn, she could see a large log building with a parking lot all along the front.  Pulling into a parking space by the main door, she noticed there weren’t many other vehicles.

“It probably gets busier in the evening,” she mused.  “I’ll be right back,” she told Chloe.  The sleek, black cat looked at her for a moment, then turned around and curled up with her back to Susan.

“Tough crowd,” Susan said, smiling slightly.  She knew Chloe was a bit spoiled, but she was also a very smart and normally sweet cat. 

Walking into the restaurant, Susan looked at the view across the room and paused.  A large lake with low mountains on the far side.  She walked over to the woman at the counter.  “This is Silver Pine Lake, isn’t it?” she asked.

The woman nodded, her long blonde hair falling over one shoulder, and Susan guessed she was in her late twenties or early thirties.   “Want something to drink?” the woman asked, then eyed Susan more carefully.  “Let me guess.  A cup of tea, right?”

Susan looked into the woman’s green eyes and smiled.  “Actually, I’d like an espresso if you have it.”

The woman shrugged.  “Suit yourself.  The machine is in the bar.”  She gestured towards an archway off to the side.

Susan nodded and walked through it into another large space.  This one was darker, but she could see several sets of glass doors that opened onto a deck or terrace with another spectacular view of the lake. 

“Can I help you?” a man asked.  Susan guessed he was in his early thirties.  He had light brown hair and deep blue eyes.  Susan told herself to quit staring and the man smiled.  “Did you want something to drink?”

“Coffee,” Susan managed.  “I mean, an espresso if you have it.  To go if possible.”

“Sit down.”  The man gestured to a stool.  “It’ll be ready in a minute.”

Susan sat and told herself to focus.  He was handsome, but she was acting like a schoolgirl.  “This is Silver Pine Lake, isn’t it?” she asked, glancing towards the glass doors.

“That’s right,” the man replied.  “Looking for a cabin?”  He smiled at her again and his blue eyes held hers. 

“I’m, um, that is…”  Susan tried again.  “I’m looking for Maddie Lawson’s place.  I believe it’s on the east side of the lake?”

“Oh,” the man paused, and his eyes clouded slightly.  “Miss Maddie passed away a few months ago.”

“I’m guessing that would make you Susan,” a man’s voice said behind her.  Turning, she saw a tall man with rugged good looks, probably in his late forties.  His hair was a combination of dark and silver, carelessly pulled back in a ponytail.  Holding out a hand, he offered it to her.  “I’m Royce Collins.”

“Nice to meet you,” Susan replied, shaking his hand.  “You knew my aunt well?”

“Very well,” Royce replied.  “She and I were good friends for a lot of years.”  He looked Susan up and down.  “You look like her.  Same nose.  Same chin.”  He smiled.  “Same hazel eyes.”

Susan nodded.  “So, I’ve been told.  I wish I’d known her better.”

Royce ran a hand along his mustache as if considering something, then smiled.  “The house is just down the road, take the second right and follow it to the lake.  Her driveway is the last left before you get to the lodge.”

“Thank you,” Susan replied. 

“And be sure to lock up tonight,” Royce added.  “We’ve had some problems lately with thefts and…”

He stopped as a deputy walked in.  “Royce, I need to talk to you,” the man said.  He was Native-American and seemed to be in his late thirties.  “Have you seen Bill Harris today?”

“No, I haven’t,” Royce replied. 

The deputy looked at the man behind the bar.  “Jason, have you seen him?”

“No,” Jason replied.

“He didn’t come home last night,” the deputy explained.  “Linda called around eight and was really upset.”

“It’s not like Bill to just take off.”  Royce looked at Susan, then back to the deputy.  “This is Miss Maddie’s niece.”  They exchanged a look, but Susan guessed they were worried about the missing man.

“Thanks again,” Susan said, picking up her coffee.  “I hope you find your friend.”

“If you need anything, just ask Natalie at the lodge,” Royce said.  “She and Miss Maddie were real close.”

Susan nodded and walked out of the bar.  Getting into her car, she put the coffee cup into the holder between the seats.  “Come on, Chloe.  Let’s get you settled, then we’ll figure out something for dinner.”

The cat meowed.  “Yes, well you’ve got plenty of food.”  Susan glanced into the rear-view mirror as she started the car.  “I just forgot to bring anything for me to eat.”

She followed Royce’s directions and soon found the road.  She drove slowly along the curves, since the road was fairly narrow and steep.  She was glad to see it got wider as they neared the water.  “This is beautiful,” Susan said.  “Looks like the lodge up ahead, so this must be our turn.”

She took the left and followed it about a quarter of a mile. The cabin, if you could call it that, was more like an Arts and Crafts home with wood siding.  It had two stories with a low roof and wide porch across the front looking out towards the lake.  The front door was painted a dark green.

Parking the car, Susan opened her purse and found the large key.  It had seemed a bit old-fashioned, but now she could see it suited the house.  “Let’s get you inside,” she said to the cat, picking up the carrier.

As they walked up to the door, she set the carrier down and turned the key in the lock.  The door opened easily, and Susan glanced back at the lake.  “Nice view,” she said, then smiled as she walked into the house.  “Oh, Chloe.  Look at the garden!”

The door opened into a large foyer that lead straight through to the back of the house.  A small dining table and chairs in front of French doors looked out onto a huge garden.  “You wouldn’t think there’d be enough light with all these pine trees,” Susan mused. 

Chloe meowed.  “Okay, we’ll get you situated, then I’ll explore the rest of the house.  I even brought your food with me.”  She set down her purse and took out a can of cat food, then picked up the carrier and carried it up the stairway to the left.  “One of the bedrooms should do nicely.”

After she got the cat settled in the room with her food, water and litter box, Susan decided she’d take a quick tour of the house.  Then, she was going outside for a closer look at that garden.

Chapter 2

The house was larger than Susan had expected.  When the lawyer had said cabin, she’d imagined a living room with fireplace, a kitchen and maybe a bedroom or two with a bath.  This was much more.

She had found three bedrooms and two bathrooms upstairs.  One of the spare rooms was set up for guests while the other looked like a study.  There were books on two walls and a big window seat looking out on the garden along the back. 

As she came back down the stairs, she saw there was an impressive living room on the other side of the entry that ran along the front of the house.  It had a beautiful view of the water while the dining room looked out at the garden. 

The kitchen was what she’d seen as she walked in.  Well, the kitchen table to be precise.  The kitchen was surprisingly large with an L-shaped layout and a nice work island.  This was not original to the house but worked very well with the overall style.

“This is a lot of house for one person,” she said under her breath.  She hadn’t known much about her aunt.  Her father had moved to Seattle as a boy, grown up and married her mother, then passed away when Susan was four.  She had never really known that side of her family.

She walked past the kitchen table and out the French doors to a deck.  It ran along the back of the house and provided plenty of room for seating and entertaining, without taking up too much space from the garden.  She smiled as she walked down the three steps to the large gravel walkway that ran the length of the garden.

On either side of the path were beds of herbs, vegetables, flowers, and even some small fruits like strawberries and low blueberries.  Raspberries were on one end and she’d guess blackberries on the other, with roses along the back.  Even though it was September, the roses were still blooming here and there…and one area had raspberry shrubs still covered with fruit.  They must have been cut down in the spring to bear this late in the fall.

Susan knew a lot about gardens, even though she didn’t have much of one herself.  She’d illustrated several herbal books and sent photos to a well-known garden magazine.  She’d always wanted a large garden, but there just wasn’t room at her apartment for more than pots on the balcony.

Living in western Washington, she was used to the cooler days and knew they had a longer growing season.  She’d read that this part of the country had short summers with more heat.  Looking around at the vegetable beds, she was impressed with how many tomatoes were still on the vines.  No frost yet, which meant she might have time to try canning a few of them.  Something she’d always wanted to try.  She started picking a few just in case it got cold that night.

“Hello?” she heard a woman’s voice say from the deck.

Susan spun around, half expecting to see a ghost.  A Native-American woman smiled and said, “I hope I didn’t scare you.  I’m Natalie, and Royce called to say you’d arrived.”  She held up a large key.  “I wanted to return this and see if you needed anything for dinner.”

“It’s nice to meet you,” Susan said, walking back to the deck and setting the tomatoes on a small table.  “Were you close with my aunt?”

“Maddie was a good friend,” Natalie replied.  “She was there for me after my husband…”  She stopped, then smiled.  “You look a bit like her.”

Susan nodded.  “So, I’ve been told.  I wish I’d known her.”

“She was a very independent woman,” Natalie said.  “She lived out here by herself, but she always had the guest room ready if anyone needed a shoulder to cry on…or a safe place to stay.”

“Did that happen a lot?” Susan asked.  “I mean this seems like such a lovely place.”

“Oh, it’s a beautiful place to live,” Natalie assured her, “but there’s always…”  She stopped and turned around at the sound of a meow.  “Is that your cat?”

“Chloe!” Susan ran over and scooped up the cat.  “How did you get out of the bedroom?”

“The guest room door doesn’t always latch,” Natalie said.  “Do you mind?”  She reached out to pet the cat.

“Not if she doesn’t,” Susan replied.  “She not very friendly with strangers…but she seems to like you.”

“I’m good with animals,” Natalie said.  “It’s my gift.”

“Do you have a cat?” Susan asked.

“I wish!”  Natalie smiled.  “Three dogs, a parakeet, two hamsters, and a goldfish, but my youngest is allergic to cats.”  She walked over and picked up the tomatoes.  “Let me get these for you.”

“Thank you.  How many children do you have?” Susan asked as they went back into the house.  She closed the door, then put Chloe down on the floor.

“Two boys,” Natalie replied.  “Twelve and nine.  They are the lights of my life, but they do keep me busy.”

As Chloe ran after a moth that had also come in through the French doors, the women both laughed.  In the brighter light, Susan saw that Natalie was probably in her mid-thirties and very pretty. 

“I’m glad you stopped by,” Susan said.  “I remembered Chloe’s food, but I didn’t think to pack any of my own.  I guess I thought there would be a store or something…”

“Why don’t you come over and have dinner?” Natalie asked.  “My treat.”

“That’s very nice.”  Susan smiled.  “I’ll just get a few more tomatoes and put Chloe away.  I don’t want to leave her out while I’m gone, not until she gets used to the house.”  She paused.  “My aunt has been gone for a few weeks.  Are you the one who’s been taking care of the garden?”

“Me and my boys,” Natalie replied.  “My oldest is very good with plants.  That seems to be his gift.”

“I see.”  Susan smiled.  There was nothing unusual about it really, but the way Natalie said gift made it seem like it should be spelled with a capital G.

Natalie looked over at the tomatoes.  “There’s no frost expected for at least another week.  I’m sure the tomatoes will be fine for a few more days.”

“Good to know,” Susan said, walking with her to the front door.  “Thank you again for the invitation.  I’ll be over in about half an hour.”

“See you then,” Natalie replied, then turned and walked out the door.  Susan watched her walk down the driveway.  It was still light enough to see, but she was surprised Natalie hadn’t driven.  Of course, she might know a shortcut back to the lodge.

As she closed the door, she looked around and saw Chloe on the coffee table.  “You know you’re not supposed to be up there…moth or no moth.”  She picked up the cat and took her upstairs.  “Let’s see if we can figure out this door, so you don’t get into trouble while I’m gone.”

With Chloe securely tucked into the guest room, Susan walked over to the master bedroom.  This space had a nice view of the water in the front and the woods on the side.  The bathroom had a large window over the clawfoot tub that looked out over the garden.  It was a little warm up here, so she opened the window facing the woods to let in some cool air. 

Susan went into the bathroom to wash her face, changed her clothes into something less wrinkled, and touched up her makeup.  When she was ready to leave, she walked over to close the window, then stopped.  A wolf was howling and as she listened, others joined in.  It was an eerie sound and after a few moments, it stopped as quickly as it had begun. 

She grabbed her jacket and decided she would definitely be driving to the lodge.  She locked the front door and walked quickly to her car.  When she got in, she glanced around, then realized there were probably wolves and other animals all around her.  This was a lake surrounded by forest and rather remote despite the houses and lodge.  Taking a deep breath, she turned the car around and drove back to the main road.

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